Our First Draft for Our Pitch

We have just finished our first draft for our pitch. In our pitch it contains who's in the film, where it ill be filmed and what time period its in e.g 22:00 pm . Lastly it contains a brief plot of what our film is about and what might happen and who the film would be aimed at e.g 15yr olds. We are going to improve on our first draft by expanding our plot into more detail so the audience will get a better idea of the suspence we are trying to create within our film. This is our first draft of our pitch: Our film concept is a horror film based loosely on the hit film PARANORMAL ACTIVITY. A boy of 16 called John Tyler is convinced that his house is haunted, so he allows his friend-also aged 16- called David Gray to sleep over to see all of the abnormal activity that happens in Johns house. Johns parents are with friends for the weekend and so they are alone. While they are sleeping there will be noises in the loft and doors will open and close. Therefore they will both get frightened and eventually try to leave the house. But the front door is locked and they can't leave the house and they will die in the process.

FILM LOCATION
The film will be shot at Lonsdale Drive

TIME 
Shot at midnight

CAST
Kieran stars as John Tyler
David stars as David Gray
Stuart is the cinematographer and storyboard artist
Connor will be doing the special effects including sounds and editing
We all have a role to make sure everything goes to plan and that it runs smoothly.

MARKET
Our film will be aimed at 15 to 25 year olds as this is the biggest market.